Thesis: In order to cut down on pollution and waste, the games Pack Man and Planet Green influence people to change their everyday energy-wasting lifestyles by showing easy ways to conserve energy and minimize waste.
Body 1: Analyze the techniques that are used in both of the games. Write about the comparisons between both of the games and tell how these techniques influence people to change their everyday energy-wasting lifestyles.
Body 2: Analyze the techniques that are unique to each of the individual games. Write about how the games differ in the ways they influence people, and write about how these techniques are successful in getting their message across.
Body 3: Tell which game is more effective in their message and which game is able to make more of a differance. Explain why one game is better at influenceing people to change their everyday lifestyles and become more energy efficient than the other.
Conclusion: Go over thesis and wrap up essay.
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6 comments:
I felt that your thesis was very well written and will be easily moldable into a good paper. On the other hand I found your outline was very vague. I have never played the game and could have written that outline. Try to narrow down to some actual idea sthat will be used in the paper. Hope that did not come out too harsh
I feel the same way try and make your thesis more narrow instead of being so broad. I found out that this will make it much easier to write your paper.
You have a good thesis and the body paragraphs look complete, but you should add more. I'm sure you know what you need to add even though the examples aren't all that specific in the outline.
i like the thesis is straight froward and to the point. i also like the way you set up your essay.
I think you have a very strong thesis.
I feel that your thesis is very strong.And I like how you outline the body. This should be a good paper.
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